Random new song i wrote

[mnkyman]

ive been writing this off and on..nothing really special..i just like it

 

didnt ahve internet past week so i decided to finish it..

 

nothing special..just posting for some feedback

 

"La Tercera Prueba"

(The Third Try)

 

http://upload.txbands.com/musicdrill/Laterceraprueba.wav

 

^sorry couldnt save it as compressed wav..it kept crashing my finale (and since its such a larger file, if u try streaming it lags..or atleast it did for me..so right click and save it somewhere to listen

[mnkyman]

any feedback would be great :/

[MartinHorn]

It's not bad, but I don't like the ending, it makes the song seem unfinished.